Tuesday, September 6, 2011

The person who influenced me the most

The person who influenced me the most is my mother. One time at christmas,when she served one more time an amazing german food I noticed that she is the most important person in my life.
She is 54 years old and in my mind the samrtest person on the planet because everytime she tries to find a solution to a problem and she works hard to reach her solution. But sometimes this even her weakness because she tries to hard and does not know when she should finish the work and rest for some hours to recover. She is working 8-10 hours a day to make sure that her children have the best future they can wish and she is happy when she can say I opend the doors for the best possible education so my children are able to live their own life without beeing depend from their parents anymore. I mean she will help them if they have problems.
Back to this situation at the christmas dinner I felt so happy about beeing part of this family because it was a feeling like there were no problems for example in school or with friends. It just was like there were only te family, the nice dinner and the celebration of the feast of love.Later on that evening my girlfriend joined the dinner and than it was a perfect time for me. The 3 most important persones in my life were sitting on one table and I just felt like flying in the sky.

2 comments:

  1. It was a descriptive text about your mother. Good example what you have done with your mother.

    I got to know your mother's personality and what does she mean to you. You used lot of powerful sentences like " the most important person in your life", and at the end when you were sitting on a table and just feel like flying in the sky.

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  2. I really liked this narrative because I feel that you really spoke what was on your mind and did not deviate from your honest thoughts/ and opinions on the event. You speak with a maturity that is rare nowadays, most teens will not compliment and appreciate their parents (your mother) openly as you did. You care about the things that really matter and understand that family and friends are the most valuable thing we have, unfortunately many people undervalue it.

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